Hayley Woods
My vision of being rich is having anything I want because I have enough money to buy whatever I wish, at anytime and not having to worry about "having enough money". Also being rich to me means that I will never run out of money no matter what I buy or spend it on. If I was given a 100 billion dollars, the first thing I would do is put some into my savings account at the bank so when I finish high school, I can pay my own way through post secondary and have debt at the end of it. The next thing I would do with the money is give a small portion of it to my parents so they can pay some of the bills they may have off. A few things I would buy with the money before it is all gone would be a newer lifted truck, an apartment for post secondary school, and I would buy one thing that would be very special to me... my grandpa's restored 1981 restored Chevy pickup. The list would go one with things I would buy. But one final thing I would spend the money on would be tickets for a vacation for my entire family. With the hours my dad works, my sister and I being in school all the time and my brother having his own family it would be a perfect opportunity to have a vacation and relax with my entire family. If I had to pick one place to spend time with my family it would be Bora Bora due to the amazing landscape and true beauty.
This is a good look into your character, but you good give more details to flesh it out and make it feel more impactful. Bora Bora is an awesome choice, and more detail to this decision would be great. Some for the truck - why is it special? These are the elements that make a piece better. Level 3+
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